Winter Poems
This week we created Winter Poems with Koka Amie. We had to think about the words we wanted to use, then drag and drop them into our poem. It was a little tricky. Next we had to use Loom to record ourselves reading our poems.
Wednesday, 7 August 2019
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Ngā mihi nui,
Room 2 @Elgin School.
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ReplyDeleteYou guys are really very clever
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem Bruce
ReplyDeleteDear Dre,
ReplyDeletewe like how you wrote a winter poem.
We liked how clear your voice was.
We liked how you explained what you liked about winter.
Maybe next time you could stay still so we can see your face in the video.
Do you like playing sport in Winter? Lots of us play football, rugby and hockey.
from Room 4
Makauri School
Dear Room 4 at Makauri School,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your positive comments. Thank you for the suggestion. Dre said, next time he will keep his face still so you can see him in his video.
We saw that have been doing winter poems too and we loved your videos.
What was your favourite part when creating your winter poems?
From Room 2 Elgin School