Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
We are learners at Elgin School. This is a place where we will be able share our learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just our first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. We would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Ngā mihi nui,
Room 2 @Elgin School.
Thank you - watching what you created and crafted was amazing. We thought your videos were awesome. Room 7 thought you all worked so hard and did a wonderful job making your videos.
ReplyDeleteYour video is cool, amazing and fantastic.
Are you good swimmers?
Do you like biking?
Do you love your school
Thank you :)
Kia Ora Room 7, thank you for the kind comments.
ReplyDeleteWe know how to swim quite well (Kaygin). We can swim on our backs (Bruce). We practice doing long arms (Fairlane). We practice doing dolphin dive (Chevey)
I like biking (Justyce). We ride our bikes, and we wear our helmets (Raukura). We have a school track and 40 school bikes, we also have our own helmets. We are very lucky.
I love school because we do art and have a new teachers (Dre). I love doing maths (Kowhai). I love reading (Kiarn) I love school because we do lots of fun stuff - like working on the computers (Stella). I like doing writing (Roberta).
I like school beacuse I get to do
Deletefun suff in school.my techer cool.
kia ora room 2
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