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Wednesday 4 September 2019

Buddy Writing

Buddy Writing: 

Last week Room 2 worked with a Buddy to complete their stories, one person was the author, and the other was the illustrator. Check out some our mahi. 

Author: Fairlane and Illustrator: Jah



Today my mum went on a double Decker bus from Gisborne to Auckland. I am  happy because she is getting a new car. We had some pies for breakfast. My auntie and uncle came with me to have breakfast. By Fairlane

Author: Phoenyx    Illustrator: Swyft 

I made a dinosaur at school and I built it on my own. I was happy and I liked my
dinosaur. And I made the claws and I made the head. I made the tail and I
made the spikes. I made the mouth all by myself. 

Story By Phoenyx
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2 comments:

  1. cheryl@makauri10 September 2019 at 09:03

    Kia ora Room 2,
    we liked how Swyft did the Google Drawing of the Dinosaur. We liked the spikes and teeth.
    We liked how the dinosaur was made with different colours and shapes.
    We thought it was amazing.
    Mrs Torrie thinks you worked well together to complete this mahi.
    Ka pai to mahi!
    from
    Room 4 Makauri School

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  2. ALana6 November 2019 at 11:11

    Kia oir Room2 this is a Alana for GLENlnnes

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Room 2 @Elgin School.

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